I am participating in #SOL19. Thanks to the twowritingteachers blog team for sponsoring this event.
Writing inspired by the mentor text I Know It’s Autumn! by Eileen Spinnelli.
A Summer Counting Song
I knew it was summer because I saw one bee buzzing around a rose.
I knew it was summer because I saw two small kids running through
the lawn sprinkler and yelling!
I knew it was summer because I saw three bathing suits hanging on
the line to dry.
I knew it was summer because I tasted four ripe strawberries from a stand on
the way to the seashore.
I knew it was summer because I smelled five hamburgers sizzling on the grill.
I knew it was summer because I saw six places set at the picnic table on the patio.
I knew it was summer because I felt the raised bumps from seven mosquito bites on my
legs.
I knew it was summer because I heard eight birds chirping in the apple tree.
I knew it was summer because I tasted nine small samples of yummy fudge including
peanut butter, maple walnut, chocolate chip, mint, eggnog, cookies and cream,
vanilla, chocolate, mocha, and strawberry.
I knew it was summer because I saw ten tiny, white butterflies around my butterfly
bushes in our backyard.
I knew it was summer because I watched the sun sinking into the bay on LBI surrounded
by the summer eleven: Mary, Paul, Tom, Linda, Gwen, Leigh, Memphis, Rhonda,
and Merrill (our Corgis), my husband Ralph, and me.
I knew it was summer because I made fourteen deviled eggs for the Fourth of July picnic
but ate two of them before the start of the picnic (so we had twelve to share).
This poem is really fun and made me long for summer. It’s also a really terrific idea. I can’t wait to make my little nephew a similar poem!
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Love this format, Lynne! I will be using this with my writers in April for sure! Our reading series just finished talking about weather and seasons. I may just start Poetry Month with this format! Thank you! I long for summer!!!!
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Oh, this such a fun way to celebrate a season and write a poem! This will definitely be in plans for April.
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This is such a fun poem… except for the “raised bumps from seven mosquito bites” … Definitely going into my writing folder along with “I Know It’s Autumn” as a mentor text. I love Eileen Spinelli’s “Sophie’s Masterpiece.” Are you familiar with it.
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As a Kindergarten teacher, your teaser caught my eye. I’ve been wanting to give my students a new spring poem format to try. This is it. Thank you!!!!! Stay tuned for “I know it’s spring, because….”
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What a fun poem and a neat format!
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Patterns in poetry can really hit an idea home. and I want it to be summer now. 🙂
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I have seen counting poems before but none like this. What a great way to count plus expand emphasize a particular topic.
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