Everybody says
I am my father’s daughter:
the straight toes, dark hair, and thick eyebrows(at one time),
the habit of returning to the house several times for forgotten items,
the love of my native city, Philadelphia.
Everybody says
I’m the image of my paternal grandmother,
with red highlights in my hair from my paternal grandfather
and skin coloring to match.
Everybody says
My weight problem is inherited,
Great-grandmother, grandmother, mother;
All round and chubby – overweight by any standard.
Everybody says
My nose is like my father’s,
My love of writing and reading passed on from my mother
as well as her quick temper – thank goodness,
also quick to forgive and forget (my father).
Everybody says,
Everybody says,
Everybody says…
But I just want to be me.
With a nod to my mentor text: “Everybody Says” by Dorothy Aldis in Songs of Myself compiled by Georgia Heard
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It is interesting how we take on characteristics of certain family members. Your poem left me wondering what everybody would say about me. But then, I started writing one about my daughter. This is a great little poem and I love the ending!
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Thanks so much, Amy!
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No matter what “Everybody Says,” you are unique, your own person–strong, capable, and my friend. How lucky I am to know you. Great slice today, Lynne.
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Diane, you know I feel the same way, my dear friend! See you after ten this morning!
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Isn’t it interesting to see what traits come from what family members. I love the way you had physical traits but also personality traits mixed in.
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Thanks, Elsie. It was an interesting scaffold for me. I think my student writers could do this!
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Nice poem, Lynne! I think we are all a part of many people. Probably most like those who give us life, but also like those we encounter though varied experiences, and those we honor and learn from. It’s mind boggling when you think of it, actually – the way people and experiences shape who we are. All of those things makes us unique. Thanks for this lovely thought today.
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We do take on characteristics of our parents, but how we use them is what makes us uniquely us and isn’t that wonderful!
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This is a wonderful poem Lynn. I love how physical traits and habits are passed down through families. And then each person has their own unique way of carrying that trait.
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Thanks, Lisa. The mentor text I used helped me so much and made it easy to organize my thinking.
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I find that the older I get the more I am willing to see of my ancestors in me…I know who I am, but I also recognize that I am a sum of many influences. I’ll have to try this prompt out my with students, Lynne – loved reading through the traces of who you are.
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Loved reading this slice, Lynne! Enjoyed learning about your inherited traits! You’re an amazing person, Lynne!
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I only know you for you –and you are one of kind!! My life is fuller in so many ways because you are in it. I still remember the day when Franki said, “Come with me to this presentation. I want you to meet my friend, Lynne.” I went and we connected at the Stenhouse gathering … and the rest is history. I am glad you are you!
Clare
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I love, love, love this! I am going to borrow and try it on my own 🙂 Thank you!
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